元宵要煮多久:跪求:帮忙修改一封 英文信!!~~~~
下面是我今天写的,还是希望有人能帮我修改下,或者修正下语法错误,或者,我这么老是说谢谢会不会太罗嗦?~~这里先谢谢大家啦!~~~kaqi~
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Dear aunty Hong,
Words could hardly express my heartfelt thanks for your generosity and your kindness to sponsor me to finish my study in Australia. I know that you are a busy person and I really appreciate you taking your time thinking of me.How I regret that I'm now thousands of miles away from you and can only thank your kind-hearted in this way.
You can imagine how embarrassed we were since we have been fail to get in touch with you all the while. Cause there are no your E-mail address and telephone number. Besides,as you know,for the last couple of months,I have been fully engaged with my study in FuZhou ,which is no access to e-mail.Currently, I come back for few days rest and as will still going back FUZhou for next section study.
But whatever the reason is,it is difficult for me to justify we have not sent any words to you.As the saying goes,better late than never,now I sent you this e-mail,which hopefully can reach you.Please forgive my rudeness.
We haven't seen you since we were met in China, which was nearly two years ago! Grandpa and my parents let me convey their deepest gratitudes to you and we all lookingforward to your next visit to China when they will be able to pay back some of the hospitality we received during your memorable stay in China. With kind personal regards.
Once again thank you so so much for offering me the opportunity! This is like a chance of a lifetime. I will cherish it. I promise you that I will work very hard and I will try my best to repay you someday.
Best wishes to you and your family. And please send my love to XiaoLong and Grace.
Yours sincerely,
Vivian
Dear aunty Hong,
No words could express my heartfelt thanks for your generosity and your kindness to give me the opportunity to further my study in Australia. I know that you are very busy and really appreciate your thinking of me.It is regretful that I'm now thousands of miles away from you and can only thank your kindness in this way.
You can imagine how embarrassed we were since the moment we lost the way to get in touch with you in such a long time. Cause i don't have your E-mail address and telephone number. Besides,as you know,for the last couple of months,I have been fully involved in my study in FuZhou ,where there is no access to the net.Currently, I come back for a few days' rest and will go back to FUZhou for the next semester.
But whatever the reason is,it is difficult for me to explain why we have not sent any regards to you.As the saying goes,better late than never,now I send you this e-mail,which i hope can reach you.Please forgive my rudeness.
We haven't seen you since we met in China, which was nearly two years ago! Grandpa and my parents ask me to express their deepest gratitudes to you and we are all looking forward to your next visit to China so that we will be able to pay back some of the hospitality we received during your memorable stay in China.
Once again thank you so so much for giving me the opportunity! This should be a chance of all my lifetime. I will cherish it. I promise you that I will work much harder and I assure you that I will try my best to repay you with my great achievement someday.
Best wishes to you and your family. And please send my love to XiaoLong and Grace.
Yours sincerely,
Vivian
感觉问候的句子有的地方显得多了一些,所以剪掉了一两句。
水平有限,请指正
1.You can imagine how embarrassed we were since we have failed to get in
2.there is no your
3 we met
4.we are all lookingforward